ext_134520 ([identity profile] dawnebeth.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] aliassmithjones 2011-04-07 03:44 pm (UTC)

Oh, yes--the punch! I think of that as a Starsky and Hutch moment, since it happens very similarly in S&H. Heyes is supporting his Kid. ;-D

When I was young, the scene where Kid shoots open the lock on the door and finds the cobwebby child's room was dreadfully sad, now it seems intrusive. Why do we need to know that about the old couple? I would have gladly sacrificed that scene for more with Kid and Heyes together, maybe after they figure out Greer's scheme and discuss meeting him at the train station, or whatever.

Also, Kid says he has to fix the lock on the door before he leaves--I do think that must have been sad and might make a nice, moody little fic. His thoughts on death or something.

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